Review #203

DOOM: Repercussions of Evil

Story by Peter Chimaera

Review by Warnuts

Okay enough of the weird reviews for now. Let’s see if there’s Dragon Ball 7 or something.


I guess the author of Dragon Ball 6 deleted their account. Hrm.

I am… so sad.

Maybe there’s another dragon ball—

No, let’s just go back to the list.

[Editor's Note: Up next is Doom: Repercussions of Evil, by Peter Chimaera. It’s… short at least.

John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.

This doesn’t sound like… bad, so far?

Right? It’s super short and it’s… not, terrible, yet?

John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."

Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS"

There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons.

G-good for him! Is this story even fanfiction? Like I think this is actually just the plot of Doom.

"This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!"

So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall.

"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons "I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill.

"No! I must kill the demons" he shouted The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"

And then John was a zombie.

WHAT? I see why they wanted us to review it! It’s fine, fine, fine, fine, left turn into zaniness. Is it supposed to make you think people are the demons? What? This is weird.

The real demons were the friends we made along the way.